Dialogue & voice

Writing dialogue, narrative voice, and prose style
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What does "voice" mean in fiction writing?

Voice gets called personality, style, or talent, and it's none of those. Here's what the word actually means on the page, with two versions of one sentence to prove it.
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How to punctuate dialogue correctly

Comma or period, tag or action beat: dialogue punctuation follows fixed rules most writers never learn properly, and readers notice the mistakes on sight.
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Dialogue that reveals character instead of just relaying information

Most dialogue fails because it's doing a job the plot should be doing. Here's how to make every line of speech carry the character instead of carrying cargo.
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How to write dialogue that doesn't sound stilted

Stilted dialogue has a specific, fixable cause. Here's how to cut the greetings, drop the names, and let subtext do the work that real conversations already do.
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Subtext: what characters don't say

On-the-nose dialogue states the truth outright, and readers stop believing it. Here's how to write characters who talk around what they mean, with a before and after example.
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Your dialogue tags are hurting your prose

Most writers over-tag dialogue out of anxiety, not necessity. Here's how to cut the "he said, she asked" clutter and let voice and action carry the scene.
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What is deep POV, and how to write it

Deep POV means writing third person so close to a character's mind that filter words like she felt disappear, replaced by the character's own voice on the page.
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How to write dialogue that sounds real

Real dialogue isn't transcribed speech, it's engineered speech. Here's what to cut, what to leave in, and why your characters keep sounding like the same person.
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