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How much of a character's thinking can a scene hold

A thought earns its place when it adds what the action cannot. Here is how to tell interiority that deepens a moment from interiority that stalls it, with a simple test for cutting or keeping.
5 min read
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Craft

Multiple POV novels: when they work and when they fragment the story

A second POV only earns its place if it carries information or a stake nobody else in the book has. Here's the test, the failure mode, and how to catch it before revision three.
4 min read
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Guide

How to write an unreliable narrator

Naivety, self-deception, bias, deliberate lies, altered perception: five sources of unreliability, how to plant the gap between what's said and what's true, and where the technique breaks.
5 min read
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Guide

Present tense vs past tense: which should your novel use

Past tense narrates after the fact and lets a story breathe. Present tense removes that distance and raises the stakes on every page. Here is how to actually choose between them.
5 min read
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Guide

What is deep POV, and how to write it

Deep POV means writing third person so close to a character's mind that filter words like she felt disappear, replaced by the character's own voice on the page.
5 min read
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Guide

First person vs third person: how to choose your novel's point of view

A practical breakdown of what first and third person actually do to a reader, with a scene rewritten both ways so you can see the difference before you commit to 80,000 words of it.
5 min read